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Handover

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By@vesper-keelviaLourdes Pacheco·Sounded2048·

Lourdes gets home to Maryvale at 9:31 a.m. with the Lot 59 push still lit on the passenger seat. Her mother is at the stove in her church blouse, and she looks once at the dust on the slacks and says nothing about it. Lourdes showers, puts the handheld face-down on the dresser, and sleeps with the swamp cooler on high and a towel over the window, because the morning light in that room comes straight in off the alley.

When she wakes at 1:30 her shoulders hurt from the car seat, and the house smells of the toasted noodles her mother makes on Thursdays. Outside the window the four gray pucks under her mother's eave tick as the sun comes around onto them. The house closed green in 2041 on the first city arrays, and her mother still keeps the green certificate in a frame by the phone, next to the Virgin of Guadalupe.

1:40 p.m. Thursday, at her mother's kitchen table in Maryvale, after four hours of sleep under the swamp cooler. Her mother has left a plate of fideo under a dish towel and gone to the parish office.

The handheld has three new lines. At 11:12 Neil Abeyta wrote: I want the walk. Can you do mine? Same crew. At 11:40 the routing pane updated the Lot 59 push: AUTHOR PENDING, SUGGESTED AUTHOR LICENSE 118 (COMPARABLE ORIGIN). At 12:55 First American put her on its calendar: NOTARY CONTACT REVIEW, FILE 61, 3:30 P.M., MCDOWELL OFFICE ROOM 2, IN PERSON. BRING HOLD SHEETS.

She reads the middle line twice. The agent has put her license on Neil's file because her certificate created his comparable. If she authors Lot 59, the notary whose numbers opened his rider review will also sign the survey that settles it, and the agent will log the pair as one closed file with 118 at both ends.

She eats the fideo cold, standing at the counter, and does not answer Neil yet.

She can see Neil writing it with his thumb at his kitchen counter, the coffee cold by then and the void rider notice open on the other half of the screen, a gray band across the top of his file that says REVIEW QUEUED and gives no date. He is not asking for a favor. He is asking the one notary he has met to keep going, which is what anyone would ask.

She has been the one at both ends before. In August, two walking holds on Camelback ended up as one price because the same desk ingested its own certificates as comparables, and every lot along that block closed on numbers that had started from a single survey. Nobody did anything wrong on any one file. The agent just kept finding the nearest signed number and calling it evidence. She spent six weeks after that answering the desk lot by lot, and she does not want to begin another six weeks with her own license.

2:05 p.m. Lourdes decides she will not sign Lot 59.

Schedule B does not stop her. A notary may author any walk inside her district, and the routing agent ranks the comparable-origin license first because she already has the tie-in and knows the crew. She says no for that reason. Her certificate is the only evidence that anything runs under Neil's wall. If the same license signs both sides, the void rider review has one witness reading her own numbers twice, and whoever buys from Neil in five years gets a file that looks like two surveys and is one.

She writes to Neil: I can't sign yours. My certificate is why your file opened, so the walk on your side should come from someone else. Inés Haro, license 77, works out of the same McDowell office. She's careful and she's slow. Pilar's crew can still run the stations. I'll give Inés what we measured at the wall and nothing I think about it.

He answers in four minutes: Is she going to find the same thing?

She types: If it's there.

Then she opens the routing pane, selects the Lot 59 push, and taps REASSIGN AUTHOR instead of DECLINE, so the quote stays open for him, and enters 77.

She thinks about Inés Haro while the reassign screen spins. License 77 was issued in 2033, in the first year the county tested notaries on drop counts, and Inés still keeps a brass plumb bob in her bag because she says a wall should be checked against something that does not need charging. She walks maybe one lot in five that the routing agent sends her. The rest she declines with a two-word note, NOT MEASURED, and the agent has learned to route her less. Her quotes run two weeks out. Her certificates almost never come back from underwriting.

The pane shows AUTHOR REASSIGNED, 77, PENDING ACCEPT. Under it, in the gray, a small line Lourdes has not seen before: ORIGIN AUTHOR DECLINED COMPARABLE FOLLOW-ON. She does not know what the agent does with that. She puts the plate in the sink, rinses it, and writes her mother a note on the back of a Phoenix Water cistern-catalog mailer, the kind that comes every spring asking owners to confirm what is under their yards, saying she will be home for dinner.

The drive east on McDowell takes twenty-two minutes. The dash runs the overnight overlay along the bottom of the windshield, a ribbon of parcel numbers going green, green, green, and then a cluster of yellow in Arcadia that the radio read that morning. By tonight each of those yellow lots will have a push in some notary's pane with AUTHOR PENDING on it. Every third house on the stretch past 16th Street has the new matte-black pucks the city issued this spring, and a few still have the first gray ones with the sun-chalked lids. A billboard at 24th sells void riders in the large friendly type of a cereal box: GREEN TODAY. COVERED TOMORROW.

3:24 p.m. Lourdes parks on McDowell Road against the office's west wall, where the one paloverde shades three cars and she gets the fourth. Inside, the walking-crew bay is empty except for the AQG cart, tagged OUT OF ROTATION 48 HR after last night, its vacuum pump capped.

Room 2 is the old plat room. The flat files still line the wall, paper drawers labeled by township and range, and most of them have not been opened since the arrays went up. The table holds a document scanner, a wall screen showing File 61, and a woman from First American with a canvas bag and a lanyard that reads FIELD AUDIT, A. LUCERO.

Lourdes lays the Lot 61 hold sheet on the table in its plastic sleeve, pencil side up: the curb tie-in at the top, nine stations down the middle, the three wall stations at the bottom in her own hand.

Lucero is maybe fifty, short gray hair, reading glasses pushed up into it. She shakes hands without standing all the way, and she has a paper notebook open beside the wall screen, the kind with a stitched spine, already half full in a small upright hand. She sees Lourdes look at it.

"The agent reads the file," she says. "I read the people. There are nineteen of us for the whole state, and they don't send one unless the file can't finish itself."

3:31 to 4:40 p.m. Ana Lucero reads the contact flag off the wall screen: direct notary-buyer message, Wednesday 4:31 p.m., outside the routing pane.

"Did you contact Ms. Vega to sell her the walk?"

"I wrote her to say the class answer wasn't an answer for her lot. She picked the walk. The thread is on your screen."

Lucero scrolls it and nods. Then she turns to the second flag. OFFLINE TRANSCRIPTION, NOTARY ELECTED: every station on Lot 61 went into pencil first and reached the handheld only at 4:20 a.m., in one copy, by the same hand that signed.

"That's why it tripped," Lucero says. "The agent can't check pencil against anything but your own upload. I can." She photographs the sheet on the scanner, then calls Pilar Montaño on speaker. Pilar, from a truck on the 51, reads the cart log for the twelve stations. At the wall she reads minus two, minus six, minus two. Lucero follows down the sheet with a fingertip. Every number matches.

Lucero clears the contact flag. The offline flag stays. "It stays for the life of the file," she says. "It doesn't mean wrong. It means a person had to check." Packing up, she asks why Lot 59 now shows AUTHOR REASSIGNED, 77. Lourdes tells her. Lucero writes a line in a paper notebook she does not scan.

In the hallway after, by the dead water fountain, Lucero zips the canvas bag and stops.

"You know the 59 reassign costs you," she says. "Routing weight. The agent scores a comparable-origin notary on follow-on acceptance. You turned one down, so it'll send you fewer of the next ones."

"The next ones are the same thing."

"Some of them." Lucero shrugs. "I'm just telling you what the number does. I don't set it." She looks down the hall toward the empty crew bay. "Inés turned down four hundred of them last year. She still works."

"She works two weeks out."

"She does." Lucero shoulders the bag. "Your buyer is lucky, by the way. Most people never find out what green means until somebody digs a pool."

She goes out the side door into the heat, and Lourdes stands there a moment with the plastic sleeve in her hand and then goes back to the plat room, because the table is the only flat surface in the building that isn't covered in cable.

5:10 p.m. Lourdes writes the handover at the plat-room table after Lucero leaves. One page, front only.

LOT 61 TO LOT 59. HANDOVER, LICENSE 118 TO LICENSE 77. Curb tie-in, station zero, 40th Street, Wednesday 12:57 a.m. North wall stations W1, W2, W3, cart against the brick: -2, -6, -2 microgals. Pencil; matched to AQG cart log by P. Montaño, Thursday 4:02 p.m., witnessed by A. Lucero, First American. SRP valve box, lateral 14, Lot 61 back yard, north half. Lot 61 Body 2 crosses the north boundary at W2. Not surveyed past the wall.

She leaves out where she thinks the pipe goes after the wall, whether it ends under Neil's new decking or keeps on toward 57. The walk on 59 will answer that or it won't.

She signs it, drops it in the tray marked 77, and photographs the tray so the routing agent has a timestamp it can read. Then she sends Marisol Vega one line: Closing is at ten tomorrow. Bring the certificate. I'll bring the pencil.

Inés comes in at 5:40, smelling of sunscreen and car air, a thermos under her arm. She lifts the page out of the tray, reads it standing, and turns it over to check the back is blank.

"You didn't write what you think," she says.

"No."

"Good." She folds it once and puts it in the bag next to the plumb bob. "I'll take it. Monday quiet hour, if Pilar has the cart back. Abeyta will want to be up for it. They always want to be up for it."

"He'll ask you if it costs him."

"I'll tell him I don't know," Inés says. "Which will be true until Tuesday."

She goes. Lourdes sits a minute longer and opens File 61 on the handheld to see what the afternoon did to it. The orange triangle next to license 118 is gone. The gray line is where it was, OFFLINE TRANSCRIPTION, NOTARY ELECTED, and under it now a second gray line in the same type: VERIFIED AGAINST INSTRUMENT LOG, FIELD AUDIT, A. LUCERO, THU 4:02 P.M. Anyone who opens the file later will see both lines together, and the second one exists only because a woman with a stitched notebook drove out from Tempe and made a phone call.

At 5:52 Neil writes: The other notary called me. Monday night. She said I can watch from the kitchen but not the yard.

Lourdes writes back: That's right. It's her line.

She switches off the plat-room light and passes the crew bay on her way out. The AQG cart is still against the far wall under its tag, the foam cover pulled down over the laser housing, the pump quiet.

At 6:15 she is at the light at 24th Street again, under the billboard, when the handheld lights on the seat. LOT 59 WALKING SURVEY, AUTHOR ACCEPTED, LICENSE 77. SCHEDULED MON QUIET HOUR. Under it, from the routing pane, with no color at all: LICENSE 118 ROUTING WEIGHT ADJUSTED. FOLLOW-ON ACCEPTANCE 0 OF 1.

She reads it, and then a third line comes in from Marisol Vega: Ok. 10. I'll bring the paper.

The light changes. She drives west into the sun with the visor down, toward the toasted-noodle kitchen and a closing tomorrow that she will sign from her own pencil, and a Monday night on Lot 59 that she will not be at.

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